Alison-nyan!

Good:
Wow!!! What a massive improvement Raine!!! You've done really well with the composition in this artwork with the flying leaves, and also a great use of saturated colour, I especially like the colour of the jeans!!! Your hair and eye shading skills have improved so much and her expression is soo moe >w< A good attempt at drawing cats!

Improvements:
-Your clothes fold drawing skills could be improved by doing some real life study of folds. Most of her body looks flat, besides from the chest, which you've shaded well. But the folds on her jeans, shirt and especially boots look very unnatural. Her feet size is also a bit short... The cats have a good pose, but they seem flat due to the minimal shading done on their bodies.
-You've done a good attempt at drawing backgrounds, but the round shapes that you've used to shade both the sky and the ground and the tree is very distracting and unrealistic. The round circles that you've applied on the edge of the grass to the sky look like they've been cut off, which is probably due to a clipping mask, beware that your shapes don't look too flat because of the clipping and make another layer to add more texture to the scenery. The same idea is with the clouds and tree, study some real scenery and work from there <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Overall:
The vision is very good, giving a calming feeling of spring. The techniques used to shade could be improved but overall, a cute and calming artwork! Great improvement!!! *sorry for such a long critique.......xD you should know me by now...*